Kindly consider the following editing and proof-reading instructions 🙂
– We consider the Personal Statement to be finalised in principle and in terms of content. Please do no majorly re-write it. We only want a final proof-read and editing (no rewriting) to bring out the points even more reader-friendly and ensure that there are no hastiness errors in it or grammar mistakes.
– Please ensure that the entire text is in British English (NOT US English)
– Please carefully review the impact of the first sentence. It needs to be grammatically correct, short and powerful. If you feel that the first sentence meet the criteria, then leave it or change it. Here is a possible alternative formulation for the first sentence. Which of them do you prefer? Business and entrepreneurship are a determining factor for the progress of today’s society and economy.
– Please bear in mind that the text is written by a 17 year old high school student who is not a native-English speaker. Therefore, the writing style needs to be further simplified instead of making it more sophisticated. Wherever you see a chance to simplify the sentence structure, please go ahead.
– Here is the link to the Bachelor programme for background: https://escp.eu/programmes/bachelor-in-management-BSc
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