This is my UC application refine my best to your best ability.

This is my UC application. I struggled to trim down my essay to 350 words per prompt so please refine my best to your best ability. I want to make sure the flow of the story I want to share is consistent and well-organized as 4 prompts are relevant to each other. Correct grammar, word uses, and writing tone if necessary. There is a highlight sentence that I would like to keep but the tone does sound awkward. Feel free to reorganize the structure into separate paragraphs but make sure to keep the idea.

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