I need to submit a thesis statement (Statement of Purpose). Since writer #35593 has written my masters thesis, I would like to use them again. I have not worked on this paper for over a decade and just found out from my university advisor that the thesis statement must be submitted first, so I need it ASAP. I have an idea of what to write, but since my writer has done such a great job with my thesis, I think he/ she would most likelywrite a better Statement of Purposethan I could.
Example from my thesis advisor on a thesis statement (Statement of Purpose):
The purpose of this thesis is to show that the power of words governs ones life through thoughts and thinking patterns and how through the power of words ones subconscious mind becomes programmedeither in the positive or negative. Furthermore, this dissertation claims that these positive and negative programs, formed from the meanings one has given to events in ones life, lead one into the causes and effects that determine the directions one life takes.
GUIDELINES FROM MY UNIVERSITY
Q: WHAT MAKES A GOOD THESIS STATEMENT?
A: IT SHOULD BE MEASURABLE!
Frequently, students submit a statement of purpose that makes for great introductory material, but they
dont tell us specifically what they are going to prove about their topic. A good statement must tell us
the predetermined conclusion of your research and writing, which makes it measurable. Part of the
review process is the Thesis/Dissertation Committees determination of whether or not you have
sufficiently supported your statement, and for them to do that, it must have a measurable outcome.
For example, if your statement of purpose says you will demonstrate what enlightenment is. Instead,
it should say, This paper will demonstrate that enlightenment is ______ what? Fill in the blank with
what enlightenment is so we can discern whether you proved it was what you said it was. Example:
This thesis (or dissertation) will demonstrate that enlightenment is a higher state of consciousness.
Continuing with your statement, if it says you will tell us how individuals can realize a state of
enlightenment in this lifetime, it should, instead, give us the how, like this: This dissertation claims
that humans can become enlightened in this lifetime by practicing _____ what? Yoga? Meditation?
Prayer? You fill in the blank with one to three metaphysical practices. When we know what your paper
claims needs to be done in order to become enlightened, we can discern whether you proved that to be
true through your writing and research. This makes it measurable, rather than open-ended.
Here is another example of a good statement of purpose:
This dissertation will show readers we can draw creative energy from otherswhether they crossed
over to the other side ages ago or are currently living on this planet. Their energy can stimulate our
existing creative talents, as well as enable us to perform creative acts with which we had no former
experience. Furthermore, this creative exchange is all made possible because of our shared God
Connection.
Do you see how the above statement is measurable? With this statement, the student would have to
prove: We can get creative energy from others (which is measurable), rather than saying it will prove
where energy comes from (which is open-ended and not measurable). It says, The energy of others
can stimulate our existing creative talents and enable us to perform creative acts (measurable), rather
than saying it will show us what the energy of others stimulates and what we can do with it
(unmeasurable). It also sets the student up to prove: Our energy exchange is possible because we share
a God Connection (measurable), rather than saying it will show us what makes energy exchanges
possible (unmeasurable).
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