Most Dependent Person in my Life

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Most Dependent Person in my Life
In life, we all have that one person that has had a major influence on the way we conduct ourselves or the way we do various things. These people can be anyone we interact with daily or may have interacted with while growing up. As for my case, the most influential person that I have had while growing up was my, my mom, who had a major impact on my life in many ways.
One of the main ways that my mom influence my life was that she helped me to develop self-discipline. While growing up, my mom taught me how to manage and have self-discipline where I would be able to survive out in the real world. This element has been important in my life in the sense that it has enabled me to pursue the ambitions that I have for myself and achieve the goals I have set too.
The second way that my mom influence my life was that he helped me realized my ability to be a great parent. While raising my kids, my mom would motivate me and help me to understand that every day would not be perfect and neither would I She urged me to ensure that I reached my maximum potential whenever I felt I could not go on. Due to this influence, I raised three great children and then I went back to school to make something of myself.
Furthermore, my mom was a major influence in my life from the guidance that she provided to me in terms of choosing my career. My mom advised me on the careers that I should pursue according to what I liked. In this case, I was inspired by her advice, and this led to me venture into studying medical coding/billing because I have a passion for helping others; thus, I would love to learn more and purscixue a career under it.

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