Introduction section feedback

Post your revised introduction section here.

Be sure you read the helpful tip section on writing an introduction for this paper in the Rough Draft Module: Intro Tips.docx download

A well-written introduction section will:

be 1.5-2 pages in length
follow MLA format
headers
heading
centered, descriptive title
12 pt TNR font
be double-spaced
avoid unnecessary spacing between paragraphs
indent paragraphs
follow the classic model introduction organization
begin with an exordium (attention getter)
have an adequate narratio (background)
end with the thesis statement (ID original author, society, evolutionary forces changing the myth)
thesis statement should be bolded

Offer constructive criticism on how your student colleague could improve the revised introduction to be even stronger. Aim to offer at least three specific sentence improvements. Avocixid repeating advice already posted

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