Exploring the impact of CLIL on motivation in a Year 7 French Class

This is a literature review for an APK essay (PGCE Modern Foreign Languages) in which I explore the impact of using CLIL approach to improve motivation and, ideally, help to raise the number of students who choose languages in GCSEs. I already have around 500 words of the literature review. Attached, there is a draft of the LR revised by a tutor from the university who gives me some feedback.