First, watch the videos and read the book pg 130-173. Then, edit the paper (named ##5) reflecting the feedback and follow the prompt. While editing the paper, make sure to use the note. https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/16vqioznXTPafJlJIDwVA1vtcamK2_5tM
Feedback:
-Try to double check spelling for major terms (e.g. Tokugawa, Ieyasu (with an “i”), daimyo, etc)
-You could take out a lot of extraneous detail and instead focus on answering all aspects of the question
-Some things you’re missing: system of alternate attendance & other examples of how Tokugawa shogunate controlled daimyo beyond land distribution, ban on foreign trade, discussion of Tokugawa social class system and culture
-Ending also incomplete: missing famines and attempts at economic reforms, when and how Europeans and Americans re-entered Japan, D
Prompt: Describe (in 500-700 words) the Tokugawa regimes initial success at creating stability and prosperity, as well as its later problems (from the mid-eighteenth century onwards) and eventual demise in the late nineteenth century. Make sure you discuss political, economic, social, and cultural aspects, and how these are related to each other, as well as factors both internal and external to Tokugawa Japan.
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