Please help me fix these issues in my paper
You were on the right track here but need some additional work on this section. You provided a discussion of the demographics and results through an inferential analysis. That being said, there does not appear to be an inferential analysis that will allow you to say anything about your hypothesis test. You also need to address effect size in your next submission. I look forward to seeing this work evolve.
Best,
Dr. Owens
RUBRICS
CRITERIA 1
Interpret statistical findings using common language.
COMPETENCY
BASIC
Interprets statistical findings but language is unclear or inaccurate.
COMMENTS:
You attempted this but it was unclear due to the lack of inferential analysis
CRITERIA 2
DISTINGUISHED
Describes participants using demographic statistics that reflect an awareness of sociocultural differences.
COMMENTS:
You did a good job with this
CRITERIA 3
Report statistical findings using APA style.
COMPETENCY
BASIC
Reports statistical findings, but either does not use APA style or the APA style is with significant errors.
COMMENTS:
You need to do this for descriptive and inferential analysis
CRITERIA 4
Describe statistical significance using APA style.
COMPETENCY
NON_PERFORMANCE
Does not describe statistical significance.
COMMENTS:
This was not addressed
CRITERIA 5
Describe the influence of effect size using APA style.
COMPETENCY
NON_PERFORMANCE
Does not describe influence of effect size.
COMMENTS:
This was not addressed
CRITERIA 6
Write an organized paper with purpose, evidence, sentence structure, and scholarly tone.
COMPETENCY
DISTINGUISHED
Writes an organized paper that maintains appropriate verb tense and has clear purpose, evidence, sentence structure, and scholarly tone.
COMMENTS:
The paper was well written
CRITERIA 7
Use APA-style formatting, citations, and references.
COMPETENCY
DISTINGUISHED
Uses error-free APA-style formatting, citations, and references, including proper title page.
COMMENTS:
APA format looked good throughout the paper
CRITERIA 8
Revise content to include instructor feedback.
COMPETENCY
DISTINGUISHED
Creates new insights by revising feedback to include instructor feedback.
COMMENTS:
This was the first submission
Original instructionsWrite a 2-3 page paper that analyzes and interprets the data collected from the research project.
Introduction
By successfully completing this assessment, you will demonstrate your proficiency in the following course competencies and assessment criteria:
Competency 2: Apply research methods and psychological research findings.
Interpret statistical findings using common language.
Competency 4: Conduct an ethically appropriate psychological research study.
Describe participants using demographic statistics.
Competency 5: Communicate in a manner that is scholarly, professional, and consistent with expectations for professionals in the field of psychology.
Report statistical findings using APA style.
Describe statistical significance using APA style.
Describe the influence of effect size using APA style.
Write an organized paper with clear purpose, evidence, sentence structure, and scholarly tone.
Use APA-style formatting, citations, and references.
Incorporate feedback from prior assessments.
Instructions
The next step in your research project is analyzing the data you collected. In previous courses, you wrote statistical results for several of your assessments. For this assessment, you will do the same for the variables that you have selected. Analyzing the data will help you determine the success of your study and help you make meaning of your information.
In a 23 page paper, address the following points.
Explain the statistical measures you used to analyze your data.
Be sure that you report your findings in APA style.
Describe your statistical findings, including statistical significance and influence of effect size.
Be sure to format your data in APA style.
Interpret your statistical findings using common language.
Submission Requirements
Submit your paper as your deliverable for assessment.
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