my intention on writing paper:
1.criticizing radical feminism which dissolve traditional values.
2.I presupposed that “The Yellow Wallpaper” as a representative of “healty feminism”, and “Egalia’s Daughters” as a “sick feminism”
the idea starts with comparing two ideas with two different novels.
3.The main thesis focuses more on “Egalia’s Daughters” which brought the idea of radical feminism, and even though radical feminism in that period could have been justified cannot be justified in current society.
Basic format part
1.the table of content is a bit disordered and chaotic. If there is only one
sub-title under one title, then you don’t need this sub-title, and your conclusion doesn’t need extra title.
2. Pay attention to the capitalization of words in the titles
3. to italicize or to bracket? make clear
4.Make clear research Methodology: erase such as “I would like to discuss..”
5. fix incomplete sentence and other language mistakes.
6. abstract and conclusion newly required
7. correct grammar mistakes
In text part
1. in Objective of the study, make sure to thesis statement clearer.
2. Literature review should be rewritten in the logic of
“in the past study, this literature has been studied in…. but this paper focus more on this perspective” both literature review should be manifest on what factors are different from the past studies point of view
3. In research Methodology part, a brief introduction of how feminism has been developed
what is feminism and how feminism has been turned into radical feminism
In what sense comparative between two novels can imply to the thesis statement
4.two small chapters are missing in part two: should be filled. you can reorganize from the text I give, or you can rewrite it by your own.
5. In part 3, The present state of affairs must be combined with the text, and the present state of affairs must not be separated from the text.
bring the text from the novels to back the ideas more resources that can back the idea would be welcomed
6.In part 3, some ideas which be seen as patriarchal, plz change it neutral if it can.
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