Gender roles

So basically, I sent my essay, and it is a bust my professor said it had 37 % Plagiarism I need it she said she will let me rewrite it I cannot change the topic she is giving me a chance to rewrite it and i have no clue how to do this argumentative essay
rubric as follows
Essay Guidelines:

APA Format – Version7
5 Typed Essay Body Pages (Title Page and Reference Page are EXTRA )
Must compare at least 2 literary works, BUT THIS IS ARGUMENTATIVE WRITING
Essay process must include planning, rough draft, revision, conferences, and final draft
Must include 1 block quote
Essay #1
Essay #1
Criteria Ratings Pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeExcellent
Excellent thesis; excellent evidence (support); excellent organization; sound mechanics.
98 pts
Excellent, effective, imaginative, connective
Excellent thesis; excellent evidence (support); excellent organization; sound mechanics; effective imagination, sees and makes connections.
94 pts
Mechanical flaws BUT do not reduce impact
Excellent thesis; excellent evidence (support); effective organization; less imagination or speculation; a few mechanical flaws which do not reduce the impact of the analysis.
90 pts
Adequate, safe paper, beautifully done
Intelligent, yet less concise thesis; effective evidence; sound organization; adequate mechanics; a “safe” paper, beautifully done.
98 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeGood
Good, safe thesis; completely adequate in every way; some evidence; a beginning, middle, and end.
88 pts
Good, safe, adequate, some evidence
Good, safe thesis; completely adequate in every way; some evidence; a beginning, middle, and end; significantly less imagination.
84 pts
Adequate, general, predictable, mechanical flaws
The thesis is adequate, yet unnecessarily general; predictable evidence; general analysis; a few definite mechanical flaws; intelligent observations and conclusions.
80 pts
Thesis concerns, surface analysis, mechanical flaws
The thesis is too large or too vague; some evidence, but surface analysis; definite mechanical flaws or carelessness; the writing has “moments” when it’s an essay.
88 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning OutcomeAdequate
An adequate report; vague; an intelligent summary; few references to evidence; perhaps last-minute preparation .
78 pts
Thesis, references, punctuation issues, perhaps rushed
An adequate report; the thesis is much too large or vague; an intelligent summary; few references to evidence; punctuation flaws; might reflect a simple lack of effort or hurried, last-minute preparation
74 pts
Thesis hiding, rambling concerns, grammatical errors
The thesis, if it exists, is hiding; it is up to the reader to find it; assortment of rambling generalizations; amidst all the generalization, there are enough intelligent observations to justify a passing grade; many grammatical errors.
78 pts
This criterion is linked to a Learning Outcome Needs Revision
Lack of effort; no thesis; rather brief, undeveloped.
68 pts
Revision needed, undeveloped, brief
Lack of effort; no thesis; therefore, nothing to illustrate; no interest in topic; usually, rather brief, undeveloped
64 pts
Essay is incomplete needs significant revision
Lack of effort; no thesis; no evidence, no interest in topic; usually, rather brief, undeveloped.
68 pts
In the Essay highlight the following:
Yellow – Thesis Statement
Pink – Quotes
Blue – Concluding Sentence in the Conclusion
I must have 3 quotes from each and one blocked quote I have them I just need help with fixing this essay is it is possible
The articles I chose are
“Teaching Men to be emotionally honest” by Andrew Reiner from they say I say book
What about Gender Roles in relationships? by stpehan mays I am allowed to use other information as long as it is cited

and the other article is

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