Should the US mandate an 80% reduction in raising livestock for meat production over the next decade to reduce greenhouse gas emissions significantly?

I attached the paper that needs to be revisioned/rewrite. It is called “First Draft Paper”. I also attached the feedback from my teacher and two peers that looked it over. Please do the best you can. Let me know if you have any questions. The reference page is set solid so there doesn’t need to be any editing on the last page. Those are the references I used.

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