The following instruction was what I got as feedback from my professor.
Firstly
You must strictly follow JAM’s instructions for Appearance of the Thesis: https://oppimateriaalit.jamk.fi/projectreportinginstructions/7-appearance-of-the-thesis/
Now your thesis differs too much in layout and style. Please, follow precisely instructions, and use styles in Word orthodoxly.
It has been very, very difficult to concentrate to the content of your thesis, when mistakes in style and layout break my concentration all the time. Please.
Secondly
You must rewrite the abstract of the thesis.
Please, follow precisely these rules:
Abstract
The abstract should contain approximately 200 words, and give information on the subject matter, objectives, methods and results of the work, as well as on possible further applications of the results. The descriptive part should be clearly organised and contain the following information: The goal of the work and the research task, stated in a compact, yet sufficiently informative way. An eventual assignor is named at the very beginning of the abstract. The implementation of the work is explained in broad terms, stage by stage. The results are presented compactly, as facts. The conclusions and applications are presented last. Prospects for later use and development can also be mentioned here.
On the basis of the abstract, the reader decides whether the report is worthy of a closer look. Because the abstract is short, the focus should be on the most interesting part, i.e. the results. Only full sentences should be used in the abstract, as well as statements of fact, the passive voice, and the past tense. The abstract should be an independent entity and contain no references to the work it presents (one must not write, e.g. This bachelors or masters thesis .
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