****, thank you for taking this next step in the writing process! It is important to review your annotated bibliography and see how your sources that you found can support your overall position on your topic as you continue to work on your final essay. As you read through the rubric and my feedback, start to make note of the areas where you are shining and the areas that you will be working on for your final draft, which is your final revision. Any questions at all, I am happy to help!
For this essay, you aren’t writing a literature review or conducting a study in the methods. You can remove those headings from your essay for your revision. Right now, this is written as if you conducted a research study rather than building an argument about your topic.
Thank you for explaining cyber security to start! Now, try to avoid using ‘we’ to be more specific in your writing. This will also help you create a professional tone. Try to focus on a position about cyber security that you plan to argue for this essay. You can show details rather than tell “This essay will.”
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